My third project was a critical summary homework assignment. I was for John Naughton's "Digital Capitalism Produces Few Winners". When I revised this assignment I noticed my word choice was very weak, I used lower level words that made the work sound as if anyone could have written it in a few minutes. To fix my mistakes I re-read each sentence and worked on the structure and chose better words to fit in each spot. After going through both paragraphs I think the quality increased as well as the length of each paragraph.